“Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you,” sang Mono, not knowing it was really his birthday, but no-one told him, so he went to school. He thought he had had an awesome day at school for some reason, so he walked home when he got there he opened the door and “Surprise, happy birthday!” yelled his family and friends, but he was confused, in just one second he remembered. After he gave everyone a hug they gave him his presents one of them he got a chocolate bunny. The next day the chocolate bunny melted in the sun.
By Ashley
Hi Ashley I like how you started of your story and when you said the chocolate bunny melted in the sun. But maybe next time you could put better sentence beginnings in it
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