Lumpy brown Mud oozed and squelched through my running shoes. My backpack felt so heavy it was like
my shoulders had shrunk. Then finally I
saw it right in front of me, the red tape signifying I had finished the race. I
dashed down towards the peaceful beach. As each
strong wave pounded on the rocks, I stood spellbound by the glistening sea. The
spray of the ocean and foam creeped up the steps,
trying to make contact with my wrinkly feet. I sighed loudly, and thought to
myself ‘why would I want to live anywhere else’?
By
Anna
I liked how you said lumpy brown mud instead of brown mud and I liked how you used a simile it was like my shoulders had shrunk.
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ReplyDeleteGood description and go use of word
I like the start "brown mud oozed' i like the word oozed