There was once a bunny called bob and he was very active and bouncy he wouldn't stop bouncing. He hops round the meadow each day for an exercise. One night he went on a jog it was very dodgy there were a lot of gunmen out there looking for us and I was out there running, one of the gunmen saw and took a shot and he got me in the right leg when each rabbit gets shot they turn to a chocolate rabbit I was forming to chocolate. In the afternoon the next day I was in the field and the people in the farmhouse saw a chocolate rabbit melting in the sun.
By Ben
I like how you described the bunny as very active and bouncy.I also like how said the rabbit was melting in the sun but try to add some more fullstops.
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