Once I was walking next to a shop then I see a piano shop. I walked in with a cold chill going down my back. I could here the piano playing I could see the girl hitting all of the keys. Then... Crash. The music holder tipped over I put it back up. I had a feeling that people were looking at me. Then I saw music sheet on the floor. I picked them up and run out of the piano shop. 1 minute later I went back and said sorry the girl said it was ok and we were friends.
By Madison
Nice story Madison nice language in your writing next time try and use more descriptive language.
ReplyDeleteBy Ben Mercer Broadgreen intermediate school :)
Your story is really cool Madison,
ReplyDeleteJust make sure that it makes sense!
I really like your story next time check the spelling
ReplyDelete-Samira