As I was running away from a mysterious figure in a brown trench coat, through the tropical jungle, I tripped face first into the mud. I felt a heavy weight hit me on my back, it was a coconut. The brown mysterious figure started walking towards me, I was panicking, he started talking, “look, tell me where the mystical steps of Poseidon are, otherwise I will ...Bang! A lifeless body fell on me, as I pushed the body off I realised it was Alex James Queen, the murderer! I jumped up, I was covered in mud and late for... dinner……………...
By Brodie
great story with nothing that I could see to change
ReplyDeletei liked the describing words Brodie hope to here another story from you.
ReplyDeleteby jordan
I liked the described story. These are my favourite words,brown trench coat and the other one is 'tropical jungle".
ReplyDeletein your story it makes me won't to read more.
by Josh