Wednesday, June 10, 2015

JOrdan - mud, steps, heavy, brown, running

mud, steps, heavy, brown, running
In the woods a lonely brown bear was running after a salmon. After a long chase the bear finally  [caught] his salmon and chomped down on it and ate it in quite a short period of time. As the brown bear left his salmon he spotted some more prey but it was a leopard seal. He preceded cautiously through the mud closer to the sleeping leopard seal. The brown bear was now a few steps away from the big and heavy leopard seal but just before he was about to attack, the leopard seal woke up and immediately stared at the bear and warned him off with a ferocious growl.
By Jordan 

2 comments:

  1. Nice Story Jordan Nice descriptive language next time use a bit more descriptive language.

    By Ben Mercer Broadgreen Intermediate School

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  2. Great adjectives Jordan!
    But why is caught in brackets?
    -Kaitlyn

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