One morning at 7am i got up and decided to do the steps i put on my heavy running shoes and went to the bottom off the steps. And as i started i steeped in mud and the hole way up the steps i left muddy brown foot prints./ As i got to the top i looked down and all i could see was my muddy foot prints/the hole way down. on the way down i followed my foot prints down the steps and when i got to the bottom i wiped my feet on the grass and went back home
by Brooklynn
I like how you put on heavy running shoes, I also like how you wiped your shoes at the end.
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I like how you put on heavy running shoes, I also like how you wiped your shoes at the end.
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I like how you described your foot prints.Next time re read for puntaction.
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I like how you followed the muddy foot prints. Next time maybe you could use more descriptive and not repeat as much now :) jonty otautau buddy
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