There was once a guy called jeff he was very Heavy and fat so he decided to go on a workout. First every morning he would go Running down the Brown and Muddy Steps then he would go to the gym and go on the Running machine there and each day he would lose 10 pounds so in a year he would lose 3650 pounds that's a lot he did it for 5 years it was tough but he was so fit and got a world record for the skinniest person in the world and won 10 gold Medals at the 2012 London Olympics good ha.
By Ben
great story Ben. I really like how you said Jeff was fat and heavy. It was quite funny and I also like the way you described Jeff as the skinniest man in the world but next time try to add more fullstops.By Andrew.
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