“”Wow, this concert is so cool”, I yelled to my Mum. “Thank you so much for letting me come”. For the last week I had been begging my mum to go. Everyone at school had been talking about it and after a week my mum said yes. In the next song I could hear the notes of the piano, the strings of the guitar and the loud noise of the drums. It sounded so good. I could have listened to that song all day. Then the show was over. As we went home home I was replaying that song over and over...
By Riley
I liked the way that you added more instruments in to your story 😄
ReplyDeleteToko (Valley School)