Wednesday, June 24, 2015

MADDISON - YYYAAAYYY

Its 8am in the morning, the sun is shining on my cold window sill. As I open my eyes slowly I remember yes, ITS EASTER!!!!!!!! I scramble down the stairs and out the door. I see them EVERYWHERE………….. EGGS…… and ………. CHOCOLATE RABBITS!!!!!!  My heart is pounding out of my chest I'm so excited i grab all the eggs and rabbits as I can. I run back upstairs and put them on my duchies, run downstairs to have some weetabix and then go to my room. when get there the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun oh well I say to myself.    

BY MADDISON

1 comment:

  1. Hi Maddison
    I like how you started with Its 8am in the morning, and I also like the word duchies. But what are they?
    Janke Valley School

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