Wednesday, June 24, 2015

Jordan - The big meltdown

It was Easter morning and all of the kids in the neighbourhood were happy that morning. That afternoon they weren’t so happy because they hadn’t found any of the chocolate rabbits. Then one of the kids had something glaring into his eyes so he looked up to see what it was and all of the chocolate was on the roof but they didn’t know how to get up there. One of the parents got them a ladder and when they finally got up their biggest chocolate rabbit melted in the sun. At lest they had the other chocolate rabbits to eat.
 by Jordan

1 comment:

  1. I love the idea. Maybe you could ad some sort senescence for effect. Overall it was a great story and I can't wait to read your next one.
    Your buddy Logan

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