Yes we are going to the beach.Can not wait to make epic sand-castle and eat some hot chips.We are here.let’s make sand-castles.Wow my sand-castle is huge.Now we are going to break are sand-castle and have a sand fight.Going swimming bye.When i got out of the water i saw a chocolate rabbit that melted in the sun.So i ate it.it taste like sand and salt water.Then i went home and played minecraft.Overall this day was shamazing.So i hope i can do it again.The end
By Jet-Li
Good story Jet-Li. I like how you said " Can not wait to make epic sand-castle and eat some hot chips. I like how you it was shamazing. Next time you can work on putting more detail.
ReplyDeleteBy Alex ( valley school )