It was pouring down, I was walking home from school when the terrible rain started, it hit me like a bomb. I was running as fast as I could but it seemed like the rain was chasing me. After many heavy, sodden steps in the sticky brown mud I finally got back to my warm home. After about thirty minutes the house roof blew off! I was so shocked. I ran out of my home. Just down the street I could see a tornado twirling it’s way, taking roofs off at random. Great at least there will be no school tomorrow….
By Riley
I liked how you put a sudden twist on the story. Next time try and connect sentences.
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