So I was in the stingy dark old attic, you know just pottering around, dusting off old baby photos and I come across a old blue tarpaulin, I took it off the big object that’s underneath it. As I took it off the dust flew everywhere. Once I open my eyes it was just sitting there, It’s a beautiful grand piano. I dust off the lid and opened it there was music sheets on the little sheet holder I put my fingers on the keys....... and I played I didn’t stop I just played, the notes from the piano filled my sole with joy! I was so happy I stop my dad was just standing there amazed and then I turned around and it vanished right before my eyes and in its place laid a note saying “thank you for playing me one last time.”
By Maddison
Nice Story Maddison Nice Descriptive language next time use a little bit more and it will be perfect.
ReplyDeleteBy Ben Mercer Broadgreen intermediate school Nelson
that story made me laugh it was so intresing I loved it Madison
ReplyDeleteFrom luke rm 15
I loved your story and how you mad kind of mysterious. Next time re-read for spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteFrom Alyssa.C
I like how you said stingy dark old attic and also liked how you said pottering.
ReplyDeleteJanke (Valley school)
Hi Madison it's Maegan here from Otautau School.
ReplyDeleteI loved the descriptive language in your story.
Next time make sure you check all of your spelling:)
Cant wait for next weeks 100 word challenge!!