Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Blake - THE RED CAR

Waiting, waiting and waiting.  Ready to be picked, but everyone keeps walking past me not even noticing me, looking at the other toys.  Have you guessed what I am?  I’m the red push car in the far left corner.  I’m the oldest toy.  Sometimes at night when everyone is asleep I drive in the middle of the shop in the pitch black crying and crashing into everything.  When I wake everyone up I quickly go back in my place and act like I’m sleeping.  Next morning I sat in my place waiting to be picked and I finally was. 

By Blake

1 comment:

  1. Hi Blake
    I think you have a great story I liked how you put pitch black, next maybe some more good words in your story.
    from Blake (Valley School)

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