Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Week 1 - 5 sentence challenge

One day i was walking down rocks road. It was sunny. There was rocks falling down. And then suddenly a big rock came down and crushed me. everyone was sad.

 By Ryan
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 4, 2016 at 2:42 PM

    Nice story ryan,maybe next time use some different words.Harriett :)

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  2. AnonymousMay 4, 2016 at 2:47 PM

    Interesting story, next time capitalize letters at the start of your sentences.
    ~ Ryan

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