We were taking a long road trip through france, on our way to the cliffs of Normandy. We had heard crazy stories about a stairway to the sky so we decided to turn it into a holiday.
We had parked the car about ten kilometers out And Were ready to go for a walk to the cliffs.
Marc had never seen the ocean and was super excited that he began to run along the narrow dirt track through the trees.
Finally they arrived, Marc was bouncing up and down as they looked out over the cliffs they could see a stairway to the sky...
By Danny
Either you forgot a full stop here (We had parked the car about ten kilometers out And Were -) or you accidently did capitals.
ReplyDeleteSomething to look out for for next time!
~ Ryan B
Hi that was a great story.
ReplyDeleteHi Danny, this is a good effort. Make sure that you double check your story before submitting as there are a few errors... (f) for France. Try to use the skills that you have learnt in class for descriptive writing to let the reader 'see' your story. Mrs P
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