Dear Janice
So far I have been fine here, the house is nice as well as the neighbours. If I have to be honest my journey didn’t start as well as I planned. I met a man who wasn’t the nicest of people.
I met him two nights ago on the bench at the train station. He had walked up to me and sat on the bench. As he sat down I asked where he was going, but he rudely told me to leave him alone. So I did as I was told and continued to sit in silence.
It had been a while and I was beginning to wonder when the train was going to arrive. I asked him if he knew when the train was coming that's when he snapped. He turned and yelled at me telling me that I was rude and invasive. I shrank in my seat as he continued to yell at me. I whispered a quiet sorry and he punched me.
By Ruby
I like your great words instead of said like whispered. Maybe put some similes in next time.
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