Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Week 1 - The Dog by Kynan


It was a cool and windy day with the breeze bristling through the leaves. I heard a dog barking in the distance but didn’t take much notice of it. The dog kept barking on and on and on so I decided to go investigate the situation. The owner of the dog tried giving it treats to calm it down but the dog would not stop.Then all of a sudden the dog stopped, everyone one that could hear the dogs loud barking was wondering what he was barking at. One man pointed to the sky in shock everyone else looked as well. It all happened so suddenly.

By Kynan

3 comments:

  1. Nice story kynan charlotte got hooked to the story she wants to know the end of what happened,Harriett ._. -.- .-.

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  2. what happens to the dog... and it was a good story liked the cliff hanger by brandon

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  3. I liked how you added a cliff hanger to the end very intence. by sam

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