As i slowly start to walk up the steps i hear music calming and sweet music. As i get higher i see birds flying happily and calming it was as like their where nothing going wrong nothing at all. And then i saw a bright light like the sun but it did not hurt my eyes i started to walk faster up the step because i heard talking and then i saw… the best thing i could ever see. There were trees water plants animals it was like heaven ….
By Brandon
Good adjectives Brandon next time check your work before you finish
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