It was a sunny and blazing hot day. Grandpa said that we should go fishing because it's nice on the water today and it's great to go because the fish will be swimming higher in the water to get the sun light. Alright i say as i get the fishing gear and rush to the boat, we live close to the water so we don't need to hook the boat up to the truck to drive down to the water. suddenly as i was rushing down to the boat a 18 wheela ran me over. I was rushed to the hospital i recovered in 7 months time. The end
By Brandon
YOU need to use capital letters for your i But other than that a great ending Kynan
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