Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Week 1 - Mouse Trap by Harriett

As i opened the cupboard, to grab a piece of bread i suddenly heard a silent squeak. I looked through the cupboard but didn’t see anything i knew it was a mouse.I was hoping that it wasn’t a rat so then i was curious,then i had to tell mum. But i knew that she was going to buy a mouse trap so i really didn’t want to tell her but i had to so then i went to find mum then told her she said a MOUSE!!

EWWW!!! I hate mice.I have to get a mouse trap straight away so she ran and got her car keys and said mitre 10 mega here we come!

By Harriett

1 comment:

  1. You have 115 Words! Next time put capital 'I's.
    ~ Ryan [Word Police]

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