One day I was at home on my tv. My mum said I need to go outside so I did. I rang my friend George he has blonde hair, ocean blue eyes and muscular arms. I asked him if he wanted to meet me at the beach and he said ok. I was almost at the beach until I saw him come around the corner so we walked together. When we got there we saw this huge staircase going into the sky no one was around so they started to climb they saw someone then suddenly they started to fall.
By Sam Currin
good story liked your idea for the cliff hanger : brandon
ReplyDeleteGood job Sam next time try and keep it 1st person so you don't change it and go like eg i walked then they fell
ReplyDeleteYou need to add more detail but like the cliff hanger at the end From Kynan
ReplyDeleteI like how you kept the audience wondering what would happen next.
ReplyDeleteNice descriptive words.