I was running down the silent street, when suddenly boom, I hered a gunshot from across the road, I hered people running and screaming and I ran for my life with lots of other people, there were sirens and gun fire back at him. I ran until my friends cafe and she took me home and I saw it all over the news which made me cry but I was happy my friend was beside me and we cried together for ages it felt like 5 hours.
Then I realised it was all just a dream
By Maclaren
good job maclaren next time work on your spelling
ReplyDeleteI like your hook,It really hooked me into the story
ReplyDeleteYou made a couple of mistakes
By Luke