Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Week 1 - The sudden effect by Matthew

                                The sudden effect.

Rob was an ordinary guy until he became severely deaf and blind, scientists from chem labs had to use a sense enhancing serum injected into his brain. Rob didnt know that the serum made the  his senses alert, so alert that it forced him to hear every little sound like even his blood pumping.One day the scientists who had made the sense serum wanted all of it destoyed. so they tried to shoot Rob, when rob suddenly caught the bullet just before it hit him They realised that he had become a huge threat to them. Over the years Rob learned to live with it and became obsessed with trying to destroy chem labs.
By Matthew.


2 comments:

  1. You have 115 words when the limit is 110 The word police







    Kynan

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  2. good job but u missed a capital letter after destroyed

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