One day in townsville there was a old 100 yr old man and his name was joe he loved going bowling with his friends when he went to the bowling cafe he started dreaming that he was talking to a statue joe started asking lots of questions.he even asked how old he was bat the statue the didn’t reply but joe thought the statue did reply and said it was 25 yrs old but the old man saw a falling plane that fell and did all sorts of tricks in the air like flips it fell and crushed him.
good job, Connor next time put more punctuation in and in the right places.
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