As Loxy looked at her orange pyjamas, she heard a strong sound of thunder. She jumped into Willows arms, she got such a fright Willow dropped Loxy and said what’s wrong? Loxy said WHAT!? did you not hear that loud thunder? Willow looked at Loxy and said no.Loxy was so surprised and then she went round the whole town, she was asking everyone if they had heard the thunder everyone said no loxy was in shock then she went to sit in silence and think did she hear thunder? But she was positive she heard thunder.Then after a few days went past loxy decided to throw a town meeting she got everyone to come and the town yelled LOXY GOING NUTS GET HER OUT OF OUR TOWN!! Loxy ran out with tears down her face,willow chased after her yelling wait wait! Loxy pushed off the ground a few away to her hide away spot.Then on her life carried on….
By Harriett
very nice I like how it carried on from last week but there are quite a few spelling mistakes and you need to use better punctuation!
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