The girl looked outside, the rain had not gone. She sat motionless, leaning on her window. Her long blonde hair soaking wet dripping on her pale body. Her bright violet eyes blazing in the dull atmosphere, the rain had created grey shadows surrounding her room, it also created silence that filled the house. Rain lightly touched her head through a small hole in her roof, it had been there awhile. The coldness isolated the young girl, with the rain reaching out, raindrops painted her skin a dim white. Coldness represented her heart, Rain had represented her tears. But suddenly, the noise eased, the rain had stopped. What does that mean...?\
By Abby
I liked how you used heaps of describing word :)
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Great story Abby. I liked how you described the girl and how the coldness represented her heart and the rain represented her tears.
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That was a really good story. I loved how you described your charcter and how you used the rain as a way to describe how she felt. ITS AMAZING. Ruby :)
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