it is very good Ryan very descriptive
Well tried Ryan, you have pointed out lots of ideas that work well with this image. Remember, when you are talking about someone, you need to use a capital letter (God). Great work, I look forward to next week. Mrs P
I like your story because you use that stair way could go to gods home.
it is very good Ryan very descriptive
ReplyDeleteWell tried Ryan, you have pointed out lots of ideas that work well with this image. Remember, when you are talking about someone, you need to use a capital letter (God). Great work, I look forward to next week. Mrs P
ReplyDeleteI like your story because you use that stair way could go to gods home.
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