When I walk up the stairs all I can think about is falling. But the smell of fresh daisies soothes me. Butterflies and dragonflies glide and flutter around me. I can no longer see the bottom of the stairs and I start to worry. But something in me tells me to keep on walking. A light breeze crosses my face. The clouds were getting closer and closer and I could just about touch them. It started to rain so I ran up the stairs. I got to the end of the stairs and sat on the clouds. I felt at home and I felt safe.
good job your descriptive language is great I like the part you wrote about the dragonflies gliding and fluttering around you.
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great story Lucy you used the promt really good
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This is a great piece of writing Lucy, you have used some great language in this piece...'the smell soothes me', 'dragonflies glide around me'. Keep up the great work. Mrs P
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