I get ready for my friends coming over for the night. I get the sweet and sour lollies and chips out of the cupboard. (Ding Dong) I hear the doorbell ring everybody's here and they look hungry!
We all dig in and all the foods gone in seconds. We play spotlight but it started to rain and heavily so we all go inside.
My mum tells us to go to bed as the thunder roars. We get in our pajamas that are all surprisingly orange. But then everything goes silent, birds are swimming in puddles and we all get some rest.
By Caleb
you did not use the words silent and swam
ReplyDeletesome of your grammar is wrong
I liked how it was short instead of a long and boring story