Well done for including the stair from the photo stimulus that you had. Try to start your story by setting the scene rather than just jumping into it. I would liek to kow who Jo is - perhaos you could include him in your next story and describe him to us. Mrs P
great story
ReplyDeleteWell done for including the stair from the photo stimulus that you had. Try to start your story by setting the scene rather than just jumping into it. I would liek to kow who Jo is - perhaos you could include him in your next story and describe him to us. Mrs P
ReplyDeleteI like how jo killed the night and he to the door I wish your writing was little bit better. from Abinashi toor
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