Hey let's go to the park I yelled to lola
We went to the park and played some soccer lola kicked the ball so high we did’t know where it went. I found it shouted lola I came running over. I looked at her and she was looking up I looked up to woah I almost fainted there was a staircase leading to the sky.
I stepped on the first step NO cried Lola what I said do you think it’s safe I mean we could get in big trouble for going up there I took two more steps,Lola followed when we reached to the top there was something there I was sure.
By Vannary
Well done.
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Oh! I wonder what was there. You'll have to write the next chapter so we find out what was there!
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Ms Brennock
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Hi my name is Lily, I like how you put the word NO in your story but I think you should had of had an explanation mark at the end of the word NO like this NO!!!
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