Once upon a time there was an ordinary person called Leo. Leo lived in a small town called Ferndale. Everyday Leo went to the local cafe to get the newspaper and he used to sit down just outside the cafe to read the newspaper. One day Leo was reading the newspaper when a robber ran pass with a bag full of money. There was two policemen chasing him but they were far behind. Instantly Leo ran after the robber and tackled him to the ground. The policemen came running in and put the handcuffs on the robber. After the policemen pushed the robber into the police car they thanked Leo very much and they whole town started chanting “Leo, Leo, Leo”. Leo felt so proud and the whole town started to call him Fast Feet Leo.
By Lucy
Your story is good because how the whole town started to call him fast feet.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI liked you'r story because it has lots of action, and I love action.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome story Lucy.
ReplyDeleteNext time try to use more describing words.
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