Week 7 - Followed by Darkness by Sophia
I tried to speak but the words just wouldn't come out. I pushed and push until I let out a small groan. My body was a prison holding in my words as it's prisoners.
I had been in a coma for the past three days and I have finally awoken. The last thing I remember is a nice lady in a black dress with yellow sunflowers plotted on it. She offered me some tea, then the airplane was going down followed by darkness. I also heard a violin playing in the background as my mother was listening to classical music. Then I was swept into a coma.
By Sophia
Hi Sophia I liked how you said I tried to speak but the words just wouldn't come out. Next time instead of pushed and push put pushed and pushed.-Naomi
ReplyDeleteHi Sophia. I really liked your story. I really liked that you used lots of descriptions. It reminded me when I slept and woke up very late. Your story is very good, keep up the good work.
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Ms Brennock
Hi Sophia. I really liked your story. I really liked that you used lots of descriptions. It reminded me when I slept and woke up very late. Your story is very good, keep up the good work.
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Ms Brennock
Hi Sophia. I really liked your story. I really liked that you used lots of descriptions. It reminded me when I slept and woke up very late. Your story is very good, keep up the good work.
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