2019, 20:30 pm… A new prisoner arrive at Alcatraz, his name was David Samuel Thomas Mitchell.
As soon as he arrived at Alcatraz, he began planning him & his cellmates escape.
The cellmates name is guard crusher.
David went to prison for child abuse.
The plan was to escape prison while killing 2 million guards & an explosion behind them.
5:30 am.
The plan begins, they get out of their cell & killing 20 guards.
They find explosives.
Then the dynamic duo plants the explosives around the prison.
Just as they walk out the prison the warden sets of the explosives while killing 2 million guards & guard crusher.
David is knocked out, when he wakes, he finds himself inside a maximum security prison.
By Rawiri
Great work Rawiri but make sure it makes sense The plan was to kill 2 million guards and an explosion behind them. Also you needed to say arrived instead of arrive.
ReplyDeleteCaleb Andrews
Ajay rm 4. I like how you put a good amount of punctuation specially commas next time make it a little more interesting.
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