Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Week 8 Friends by Ruby



I imagined what it would be like to have friends.

Would I finally have someone to talk to, to share my thoughts and feelings with?
Would I finally have someone to eat lunch with?
Would I finally have someone to hang out with?
Would I finally have plans for the weekend?
Would I finally feel like someone loves me?
Or would I just feel the same?

After all nobody wants to be my friend.

By Ruby

3 comments:

  1. I love how you used lots of questions in story because it makes your writing unique. Maybe next time you should cheek that you have 100 words. Great story!
    Caitlin

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  2. Dear Ruby
    I liked how you write a about friends it would be

    I liked how you use 5 question marks
    By Rikilee

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  3. I love how you used questions in your writing. Next time make sure you use the whole compulsory sentence. Great story!
    Caitlin

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