I imagined what it would be like to have a rocket ship with light blue stripes with rainbow flames that would never run out of fuel and that I could fly to any planet in the universe whenever I wanted. I could visit the martians and aliens in their apartments or visit my great great grandfather on jupiter maybe. But I also imagined what it would be like to END this story, I would say at the end “goodbye.” Yeah I would say that so I will I will say good bye I will say goodbye to you, him and her so goodbye!
By charlotte
Hi, Charlotte
ReplyDeleteMy favourite sentence was 'I could visit the martians and aliens in their apartments. But it didn't make sense when you said 'I will I will say good bye'
I don't think you have used the sentence 'imagined what it would be like to have all I could see'
I really like your story and I can't wait to see your next weeks story.
From Anna. Rm 4 valley school.