Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Week 8 - The eye by Jake

2:48 saarthal
“There it is the eye of magnus”said Dr “hmm it's power…”he said noticing a journal on the floor. written in blood Dr managed to find out what it said,  ‘i imagined what it would be like to have all i could see so i have created the eye to show me the result of it but it's corrupted it only shows the future so i need to work on it fast before my time is up’ dr was confused but he wanted to see what would happen to him. He stared deep into the eye and saw him killing lord toxin but something was wrong. he was slowly dying as a result of it. he then lost focus and in terror left the tomb never to return

By jake

1 comment:

  1. I like how you said, he then lost focus and in terror left the tomb never to return. You forgot to put your capitals but pretty cool story- Noah

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