Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Week 5 - The Talking Statue by Danny



It was a sunny day in San Diego, and Ron was reading a book about what it was like in the old times. He was learning about the famous people in the 1860’s and also war heros of the american civil war.
“I remember that” said a voice that came from what seemed to be no one he looked around and the path was deserted except for a statue he was sure wasn’t there before.
“That went from 1861 to 1865” said the statue. Ron started having a conversation with the statue about his book.

After half an hour he had to go, they said goodbye,then Ron went back home.

3 comments:

  1. great work Danny but make sure u don't miss words he was sure wasn't there and add some more commas. Caleb Andrews

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  2. Hi Danny I really liked your story I think your story is really good

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  3. very good Danny you missed out he after was sure

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