There once was a guy named alcatraz he got sent to a prison in the middle of the sea in NYC it is the most brutal prison in the world and Alcatraz knew that so he wanted to escape. It was Day 2 in the prison and he saw the painting in his cell was crooked so he went to straighten it and it fell of the wall. He saw a big hole behind it and saw it was a passage he climbed into the hole and knew that it was going to be his only chance. When he got near the end he saw the bright light of the outside world. When he made it out he saw a boat and jumped on and escaped. From this very day the prison is now called Alcatraz because he was the only one ever to escape
Great idea next time possible try describing things more for instance you could have described Alcatraz or described the prison cell more. Also Theres a few capital letters missing. Other than that great story.
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