There once was a little girl that swept the floor everyday with her yellow broom. But her dream was to be a violinist in the new zealand orchestra. Something was holding her back she did not have a violin.
Two years passed and she had a violin. She had been saving up for two years to fly from australia to new zealand and finally she had saved enough. She got a taxi and went to the airport and got on a airplane and went to new zealand.
On the plane she eat a whole packet of lollies.
By Jasmine
Hi my name is Grace rm. 04 valley school your story was really good I liked how the little girl really wanted to be a violinist but in the end she did what she wanted to but next time capital letters like new zealand is capital New Zealand and you did not put eaten in your story but really good but that
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Hi, that was a very good story. I liked the way the girl wanted to be a violinist. I hope she becomes one. Qasim here is a link to my blog https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/airplane-holidays-qasim/
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