The concert is today Mum I said what concert? My violin concert. Have you eaten yet, yes I had 2 yellow bananas.
We hoped in the car and drove to the concert when we got there we practised a few times. It's time said Miss Haefely, we lined up and walk onto the stage then a airplane flew by and swept through the clouds it was so loud that no one could hear us play our violin after we finished we had a little fest and we went home and a few friends came over.
By Vannary
Hi Vannary, well done on completing the challenge this week. It sounds like the concert went well for you.
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I hope that you and friends enjoyed your feast, it's always nice to have a treat after you have worked hard.
Hi Vannary,
ReplyDeleteGood story it reminds me of the School of rock. This is a link to our school blog. I thought your story was very good.
https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/