“Breaking news a yellow airplane has been suddenly eaten by what they think is a giant violin aka Violinaraus Rex”.
“We are here at the airport were the yellow airplane used to be before the attack and the firefighters have found a person lying on the tarmac unconscious they think she is a survivor of the attack”.
The firefighters then talked to the girl and asked her to picture what the attacker looked like.
“I might sound crazy but I saw a giant violin that suddenly appeared and swept the airplane away with everyone on it. I only just managed to get out in time”.” Help Help”
“Who is that?.
By Kynan
kynan it was a good story i like the bit about the yellow plane
ReplyDeletefrom jack
Great work Kyan but make sure you spell Violinasaures right
ReplyDeleteCaleb Andrews
Great jib. I like how it is out of the ordinary. But you said they think maybe say who they is. - Sophia
ReplyDeleteHi Kynan,
ReplyDeleteGreat Story, remember to proofread your story (e.g.were should be where)
-Danny
Hi Kynan I really liked the story but I think its a little boring you don't have any vivid verbs or similes and at the end when you wrote who is that I didn't really know what you meant but the good part is that you used enough punctuation and the right punctuation but on the other hand of punctuation you might want to add commas.
ReplyDelete-Riley RM4 valley school.
Hi Kynan,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you invented a new dinosaur and you highlighted the words.You used the prompt really well.The start was really good because you were a news reporter.Good job
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