The talk
“So have you been here before” the old man said. Nothing happens “Well are u going to talk to me or not?” he says in a upset tone. Still nothing happens “ Are you one of those silent types? Yeah I'm not. I live loud and proud” a small silent vibe goes around the man. “So are u going to talk or not?” “hey sir you know you are talking to a statue right” says a young man in a helping and caring tone. “Umm...I...knew..that” says the old man hey just realised he was talking to a statue...
Dear Brandon. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm glad to see some humor. But maybe you could fix the following things. 1. you typed u instead of you so try not to do that again. 2. Grammer. Reread the story a few times to make sure it makes sense. 3. Punctuation. Make sure you put full stops and capital letters in where they are needed. Thanks - Sophia.
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