One day there was a little green dot and his name was pacman he liked eating he ate a violin with the case on .
Pac man saw a yellow airplane so chomp,chomp,chomp with 3 bites he devoured the whole airplane. The next day he went to the local river, and went mouth fishing. The current was too strong and so it swept pacman away Pac mans friend Inky asked if he has eaten the carolina reaper. Pacman said no so Pacman chomped away on the carolina reaper.
BOOM! Pac Man burst into flames and disintegrated into millions of pieces.
I liked your story and all of your punctuation like exclamation marks but next time you should use some more verbs -Corban room 4
ReplyDeleteDear Conner, I loved your story. It was very funny. I like how pacman exploded and the way you put in all the details. keep up the good work.
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