Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Week 9 - The girl how tried to help her brother by Jasmine

It was 1807 and I was sentenced to 3 years in jail, all because I had tried to take some shoe polish for my older brother.
He had tried to get a job as a shoe polisher and he had got the job. But there was one problem, he did not have any shoe polish.
I had tried to take some shoe polish from someone in the market but I got caught and sent to jail.
The jail cell that I was in smelt like wet dog and and the air had a thick musty smelling air.

It was cold and the floor was as hard as stone. Well it was stone

By Jasmine

1 comment:

  1. Cool story Jasmine, I like the way you used the word 'musty' in the sentence '- and the air had a thick musty smell-'.
    ~Ryan B

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