Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Week 9 - I dream by Sophia


I scampered through the cells looking for a way out. I didn't do anything except look after my family by looking for food. I am a mouse, stuck in this prison. I am surrounded by multiple threats mouse traps, the guard dogs and worst of all the humans. These creature are 3000 times bigger than me and could kill me with one step. I am beginning to starve and I’m now extremely frail. I weave myself through the steel bars as i run for my life. I now live with a hairy putrid man named Bruce. I dream of being back with my family, I need to make a plan!

1 comment:

  1. Great story Sophia! YOU HAVE A LOWER CASE I!!! But other than that I can't find any other mistakes.

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