“Yes!”Yelled dad.We had finally made it to the Brisbane International Airport.On the way to Brisbane we flew in a 747 boeing airplane that had a bright yellow stripe on its wings.the airport security stopped us.They rummaged through our luggage.When they came to my violon,the found a half eaten sandwich.Then they went through my sisters bag.We knew that my sister used to take drugs.The swept through the bag with a drug thingy.Suddenly it started beeping.So the took a sample and went to the drug machine.When they came back they said it had traces of Herion,Maurijna,Crystal Meth and Cocaine.They said the are going to cancel our visas.I shouted “NOOooo!,now I have to do my homework and write that big test!!!”
By Luke
I like that you used, They rummaged throught our luggage.
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