One fabulous night in the best restaurant in venice we had just eaten yellow potatoes and now the violin is play and then a big jumbo jet and heaps of planes and they all swept past me and the all ran outside looking around for where it came from my girlfriend was crying and then a big plane came out of nowhere and smack she was dead on the flaw she was cold there was blud every were there were planes evry were cars were gettring hit by planes pople were getteing hit by planes
Goodness that doesn't sound like a fun date! It ended in disaster. Well done on fitting the prompt words into your story. It was a tricky set of words. Be sure to read over your work before you publish to check for spelling mistakes.
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Hi Cruz
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it was a funny story
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Hi Cruz its Deacon I like the part were you wrote girlfriend was crying and then a big plane came out of nowhere and smack she was dead on the flaw. you have no full stops
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